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I've apparently hooked jezel on The Metamorphosis of Prime Intellect.
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From: j5nn5r Date: May 12th, 2003 07:22 am (UTC) (Link)

A good read indeed...

I enjoyed it quite a bit. I think it could have been fleshed out quite a bit more but, overall, a good story. Thank you very much for pointing us to it.
fallenpegasus From: fallenpegasus Date: May 12th, 2003 01:39 pm (UTC) (Link)
I originally thought I wanted it fleshed out more as well, but in retrospect, I don't.

It's about the size of an "old" SF novel, not one of the standard 1000 pages "bricks" being published today.

It's very tightly written and very focused as it is. Expanding it would have just inflated it for no good purpose, and added lots of places to nitpick.

Part of why I'm cheerleading for it is I want it to actually get published in print.
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